erickshe at February 28, 2012 at 3:54 pm
              Cats
        catch mice
    cute, nice, fun
 play, catch, bite,claw
            cool
 
           By: Lily
 
Ms. Erickson (not verified) at February 28, 2012 at 9:54 pm

Great job, Lily! You did a super job of describing cats!

erickshe at February 28, 2012 at 2:42 pm

                            Monkey

                         small, fat
             cleaning, smiling, frowning
             cute, cuddly, small, brown
               kidding, walking, climbing
                        brown, fat
                         cuddly
 
                          by: Mariah
Ms. Erickson (not verified) at February 28, 2012 at 9:56 pm

Very descriptive Mariah. I can see the monkeys in my mind.

erickshe at February 28, 2012 at 2:39 pm

     White

White is the same as snow.
White is cool like a snowmobile.
White is like a dove.
White is like the clouds.
White is like light.
 
 By: Jennings
erickshe at February 28, 2012 at 2:34 pm

Hunting

bow hunting

camoflauge shirt

hunt coyote

hunt deer

hunt bobcats

hunt bears

hunt rabbits

By: Sawyer

Ms. Erickson (not verified) at March 8, 2012 at 7:43 am

Sawyer it sounds like the animals better run when you are in the woods!

erickshe at February 21, 2012 at 5:00 pm
 
E ducated person
L oves sports and reading
L ikes to play with friends
Y oung and funny
S ki's on mountains, pretty cool and fun!
E nergetic
 
T reats other nicely
I s nice to evryone
N eeds friends
G ood worker
E ntertains, not just friends, but lots of people
L ittle hunter
S ays very crazy things
T ells funny stories
A wesome friends
D oes not like a lot of food
 
By: Ellyse
Ms. Erickson (not verified) at February 21, 2012 at 5:03 pm

Love your poem, Elly and I think it does describe you to a tee! Great Job!

Kim (not verified) at February 21, 2012 at 7:25 pm

Very nice...explains you well My Dear!

erickshe at February 21, 2012 at 4:54 pm
 
Grady
Sleeps
on the couch
all day
because he's a lump on a log
 
By: Chase
mom (not verified) at February 21, 2012 at 6:38 pm

Wow Chase this is too funny and so true:-)

Ms. Erickson (not verified) at February 21, 2012 at 5:04 pm

Chase , I like your poem because I think it is funny!

erickshe at February 21, 2012 at 4:52 pm
 
 
F un things
A dventures
I love school
T hings like jumping rope
H aving fun
 
L aying down and sleeping
E verything like swimming
I love green
S eeing things
G ames
A ggravating my brother
N ew things like math
G irl things
 
 By: Faith
Ms. Erickson (not verified) at February 21, 2012 at 5:05 pm

Faith you did a great job describing yourself!! I enjoyed reading your poem!

erickshe at February 21, 2012 at 4:49 pm
 
  The tiger tripped over his tail.
  Gorillas grab grapes
  Panthers push people
  Cheetahs climb cliffs carefully!
 
       By: Mason
Ms. Erickson (not verified) at February 21, 2012 at 5:06 pm

Mason, great job on your alliteration poem!

erickshe at February 21, 2012 at 4:47 pm
 
    A lot of fun
    L oving
     I love to color
    Y oung
    A wesome
    H appy
 
    C ool
    A mazing
    M om's girl
    P retty
    B eautiful
    E pic
    L ove of family
    L ots of energy
 
        By: Aliyah
Ms. Erickson (not verified) at February 21, 2012 at 5:08 pm

Aliyah, great job of describing yourself! It sounds just like you!

erickshe at February 21, 2012 at 4:36 pm

     Mary had a little cat,

     it ate alot of hats.

     Where ever Mary went, the cat

      was sure to eat a rat!

 

           By: Caitlyn

faith (not verified) at March 26, 2012 at 6:31 am

Caitlyn you did a wonderful job in poem I think that someday you could be a profesionail poetry writer when you grow up.

Ms. Erickson (not verified) at February 21, 2012 at 5:09 pm

caitlyn, I enjoyed your poem. I think that this cat must be one fat cat!

faith (not verified) at March 26, 2012 at 6:27 am

Caitlyn I reallly liked your poem I really think that someday you could be a profestionial poetry writer when you grow up.

Ms. Jone Lindbo (not verified) at February 12, 2012 at 11:04 am

Cool poem ZaK ! I liked the part about the dragon scale, do you think he would breathe magenta fire? jone

Mrs. Moretti (not verified) at February 10, 2012 at 2:03 pm

Zak, your poem is awesome! It really demonstrates higher-level thinking. You must have really thought carefully about magenta, as not only a color, but a feeling as well! Great job!

erickshe at February 10, 2012 at 1:22 pm

 

Magenta

Magenta is a magnificent color,

like a spring breeze on ocean water.

It is like purple dye.

or a dragon’s scale,

or like a dark, dark, river.

It is like a soul.

 

By Zak

Ms. Erickson (not verified) at February 11, 2012 at 9:22 am

Great job , Zak! I love your poem!

Mrs. Olson (not verified) at February 10, 2012 at 1:41 pm

This poem is excellent. It made me think, and it made me feel calm.

erickshe at February 10, 2012 at 9:46 am

We will post our poems here. Please leave a positive comment for the author. Thank You!

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